I'm not gonna quote everything you said Pat but I didnt just not like because others told me it wasn't good.
I actually really didnt like the course. There were so many holes that could have been better and so many decent holes that could have been great.
BTW, contrived would mean the features are not natural and were put there against the will of the land. Pretty much it would have been better not man-made, but left instead more natural.
Hole 1 did not have a good appearance. First of all, it is right by the range and is only separated by these big mounds that shouldn't even be there. It seemed all the mounding looked exactly the same, which is bad because they looked really contrived. Plus, the hole is straightaway and boring with little or no character.
On hole 2 I thought the water was out of place. I thought it would have, and could have been better if it was a sandy dcrub and it forced you to have the option of carrying it farther to have a better angle to the green or something. Also, there used to be bunkers right of the green which left a testy bunker shot but now it is just fairway, so it makes the chip lots easier and with lot less skill and strategy.
Hole 5 was just a hole I didn't like. The water hazard and houses around the hole really made it look visually bad. The green is not very interesting and pretty flat, and the bunkers are to far from the green to legitimatelly go into them. There is a lay-up area to the left, but even to get to there you have to carry 160 yards over water...safe, I really dont know about that...
And 11, well, it was totally contrived as well. What was originally two nice and deep bunkers to the let of the green is now a man-made grass pit that is eight feet deep. It wouldn't be so bad except it looks totally horrible. Also, yes, the green is skyline but the tiers are boring. Sure, the green has three tiers, but they aren't very difficult and it is easier then it should be to two putt from one end of the green to another. A very questionable hole, not one I particularly like or enjoyed.