Good to hear you have at least seen the pix! For the limited evaluations I was trying to make, I am very comfortable in viewing pictures and knowing what I see. What was that old Groucho Marx line - "Who are you going to believe - Pat Mucci or your own eyes?"
I don't have the book with me, so I can't respond directly, but some of the pix I am referring to are from the golfers perspective. I recall one of the third hole from the landing area, for example. The golfer would see that angle, and the mound back left of the green is a "pimple" and poorly executed, IHMO. Your opinion may vary, but that is the nature of a discussion board.
Your comments about non normal viewing angles are interesting to me. My first day at K/N they took me by Kemper Lakes. The back of the fill pad on green 5 faced Rt. 22 on the way in, and was flat and straight. I wondered why they didn't dress it up, and their answer was similar to yours - few golfers would ever see the back of the green so they didn't spend much effort on them. Given the public viewing angles, or even views as you might see from other areas of the course, I generally try to make the back side of the greens somewhat artistic, although I have heard a few comments on the Quarry 8th, as being decidedly not so!
Back to the topic at hand, my comments on Augusta specifically were noting the many wrap around green shapes, which I don't think would ever be considered good tournament golf design by better players, even if they may be fun. For that matter, how many unusual greens per course would be "good design?"
As to the mounds, it struck me that the mounding tied into slopes at CPC almost imperceptibly - the toes of slopes in the b and w photos clearly show a lot of fill went in to blend them. The mounds in the b/w photos of ANGC don't tie in naturally, as they end aprubtly at natural grade, the tops are peaked, rather than with long rollovers, and and they are much steeper on the side slopes - on a site with broad natural rolls, where arguably, broad tie in slopes would be even a better fit than CPC. Both sites have a grand natural scale, as well.
If things happened then as they do now, I suspect that w/o Mac's help, they would be a result of a contractor who has poor supervision, or is trying to make the project work on low bid by moving less earth. Of course, that is just speculation, but makes sense given the finances. Its just interesting to know in the last few years (with several books) how one of America's great courses really struggled along by virtue of its bad timing, and how it got (arguably) much better as times improved.