Some of the founders were newspapermen, editors, and writers. What they lacked in sentence structure they more than made up for in substance. They (over)used commas because they wanted to be sure we understood when they were moving on to a new concept, idea, and/or right.
You guys may have your commas in the right place, but in the process you have completely rewritten the substance of the Constitution. For example . . .
'establishing an official religion' is not the same thing as respecting an establishment of religion[/i].
Dan, had you suggested this change to Mr. Madison, he'd likely have said something like, With all due respect Mr. Editor, you may want leave the Founding to us. Not only is Congress prohibited from establishing an official religion, they also must state out of the business of religion all together. As I will say (notice all my commas). . .
"Every new and successful example, therefore, of a perfect separation between the ecclesiastical and civil matters, is of importance; and I have no doubt that every new example will succeed, as every past one has done, in showing that religion and Government will both exist in greater purity the less they are mixed together."
-- July 10, 1822, Correspondence to Edward Livingston.
Shivas, you are a typical originalist. By the time your done reading it, it doesn't much resemble the original.