Tim
Hope you receive your copy of the magazine soon
In the meantime I will post an unedited version of my review of the Mackenzie book so you can see for yourself. I had to edit it down slightly to get it to fit in the mag.
"Coming in the year of the 75th anniversary of Dr Mackenzie’s visit to Australia, this long overdue book is most welcome. Written by US architect Tom Doak, Dr James Scott from Mackenzie’s hometown of Leeds and Mackenzie’s stepgrandson Ray Haddock, the book examines Mackenzie’s life and works, although perhaps not with quite the same coherency as in Klein’s book on Ross. Whether this is due to having three authors or not is arguable. As an example, the book commences with a chapter on the Doctor’s early forays into golf design before it discusses his childhood and family history.
The significance of Mackenzie’s Australian tour is recognised by giving it a chapter of its own entitled “Two Months that Changed a Continent”. Doak fuels the controversy that Melbourne’s Yarra Yarra was designed by Mackenzie and perpetuates this theory in the book despite any supporting evidence. On the contrary, documentary evidence shows that the job was awarded to his partner Alex Russell one month after Mackenzie departed our shores. Perhaps the reason he describes Yarra’s undulating 11th green as being a “classic Mackenzie green” is that it was built so well by Russell to Mackenzie's own ideals.
The book is well illustrated by many original sketches and plans, as well as both period black and white and modern photographs of the Doctor’s work. Photographs of little known Mackenzie gems such as Claremont in California are of special interest. A frameable map of Mackenzie’s depiction of the Old Course is also appended at the back of the book.
Puzzlingly, the book lacks an index and a list of Mackenzie’s numerous published articles, while the omission of the Doctor’s famed love for dancing from the assessment of his personal life in a book of this magnitude is somewhat of an oversight.
These criticisms though, should not cloud what is an interesting and attractive book, which should be an essential part of any golf library."
As for advice for George Bahto - I wouldn't be so presumptuous as it is up to him and his publisher to include whatever they think tells the best story about Macdonald et al and their courses.
cheers
Neil