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Danny Goss

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Re: The Good Doctor Returns-Bravo!
« Reply #25 on: February 19, 2002, 02:25:02 PM »
Sure there may have been a few typos and grammatical issues and the editing may have been a little tighter but.....this was a good read and quite instructional and I read it in that light. I would have thought others reading the novel would have understood its purpose. As Geoff said - it was not meant to be War and Peace. I have always admired Geoff's books and hope to see more.
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Tommy_Naccarato

Re: The Good Doctor Returns-Bravo!
« Reply #26 on: February 19, 2002, 03:47:13 PM »
Site of the Pendleton Golf Links
Camp Pendleton, California
Design by Dr. Alister MacKenzie, assisted loyally by John Grant
Send inquirery information in care of the Valley Club Of Montecito

http://mapquest.com/maps/map.adp?size=big&mapdata=jZ2g%2b%2fXW8V8eWRgh%2fvuFMJF24AMJ01Y2%2f3qBZcUHzzVmsM1Hgx52CRydCa1yNWrymftkds0YJc7ZiTUO4vATDuki4bgM46fIKh
CJAbFL0CzKqzfHnEjqJ3E1GmOk46MhxTCp7cAJpIWAiCCblEU1viM2s9TmXjppJg%2fNGWRWutgR%2bf
SG7Gd95JCMhi7Bd4QwcpBdoblI0Nax%2bfHy5X7dN1%2bmSGQy1OoMotEq%2fQC%2fCx%2fln4TuDzKm
3B23zrs%2fQQBEQ0pdnxSdECcVnQ7LRRQmchjmA6oCaCOIrNULlFcNg7U%3d

Reason for this being black and white, the base you see just due north of Pendleton Links site is for the US Marines Top Secret Hovercraft fleet and training center.
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Tom_Egan

Re: The Good Doctor Returns-Bravo!
« Reply #27 on: February 19, 2002, 04:14:10 PM »
Mr. Cardyin2 --

No criticism intended; constructive comment only.

Disembark means "getting off of, or taking something from, a ship".  Was that your intent?

Sorry.  The divil made me do it.
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SPDB

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Re: The Good Doctor Returns-Bravo!
« Reply #28 on: February 19, 2002, 04:29:16 PM »
I think he meant to say the following:

"'Dis boat embarked from New Orleans."

I, too, am a stickler for grammar and spelling.

 ;D
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cardyin2

Re: The Good Doctor Returns-Bravo!
« Reply #29 on: February 20, 2002, 12:06:18 PM »
Good editing, gang.
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Dan Kelly

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Re: The Good Doctor Returns-Bravo!
« Reply #30 on: February 20, 2002, 12:20:03 PM »
cardyin2 --

I'm not sure "gang" is exactly the right word....

 ;D
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