I am absolutely not an architect and couldn't differntiate a topo from a typo, BUT, I know what I like and...
The first picture (268 yd. Par 4) has potential. I like the vegetation short and right on the dues but the two trees together on the left dune and the Christmas tree behind the green look out of place to me.
I would add whatever that vegetation is on the right in "splotches" on the left dunes as well.
The second picture looks like a bowling alley, complete with gutter (cart path) on the left. It might play OK but it sure looks ugly. The cart path dominates your view and the green looks pretty uninteresting as well.