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Dan Kelly

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"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« on: October 05, 2006, 12:13:46 AM »
I notice, thanks to one of George Pazin's recent posts, that my friend and colleague Rick Shefchik's first novel, "Amen Corner" -- officially scheduled for publication on March 9 of next year -- is already available at amazon.com.

See http://tinyurl.com/nead3.

Here's a short description:

"The body of the Masters rules committee chairman is found in the middle of the 10th fairway on the morning that Sam Skarda arrives at Augusta National Golf Club to play in his first Masters. Skarda, a 33-year-old police detective on medical leave from the Minneapolis police department, is an accomplished amateur golfer who won the U.S. Publinx and an invitation to play in the Masters while rehabbing a shooting injury suffered on the job.

"Evidence left at the crime scene suggests the murder might have been tied to the ongoing protest by a women's group that has been demanding that the club admit women members. Then a crusading New York Times columnist is murdered on the grounds of the club two days later. Local police suspect the murders might have been committed by a member and begin pressuring the new Augusta National president for access to the club's membership information.

"The club chairman asks Skarda for help finding the killer before the police thoroughly invade Augusta National's legendary privacy. Skarda looks for answers from members, veteran journalists, longtime caddies and ex-employees who may know why someone is determined to bring this year's Masters to a halt.

"He also falls for Caroline Rockingham, the soon-to-be ex-wife of one of the pre-tournament favorites, a former college golf teammate of Skarda's. Sam and Caroline themselves become targets as the murders continue and pressure to cancel the tournament builds. Meanwhile, the killer methodically prepares for a spectacular and deadly Sunday climax."

Sounds good, doesn't it? Well, I'm sure it is. I had the pleasure and the honor to read an earlier version of the manuscript. It was good then, and I'm sure it only got better as Rick got some expert tutelage in the Art of the Thriller from one of America's most successful thriller writers -- our friend "John Sandford."

Personally, I'm particularly gratified that two of my suggested plot twists, hatched during a drive to Sutton Bay two years ago, have made it into the novel's final version! (And, no, I'm not saying. Not now. Not ever!)

I expect all of you to buy a copy. Or several.

Congratulations to Rick on a hard-earned, well-deserved success.
« Last Edit: October 05, 2006, 12:16:40 AM by Dan Kelly »
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John Kavanaugh

Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #1 on: October 05, 2006, 07:56:43 AM »
I'm not sure even Jordan could have said Masters or Augusta National Golf Club so many times (7) in such a short period of time.  Can you really do this without getting permission fromt the club...

The plot twist I hope for is the arrest of the detective for Workmans Comp fraud...How does a guy play world class golf while being off work for a shooting injury.  He either had to have been shot in the ass or doughnut hole to be able to play golf and not work.

No way can the publisher get away with any Masters logo on the front of the book...or can he.  Did the winds swirl at 12 like the ghost of the dead man was watching...puke..

btw..Congrats Rick...I've got to order this thing just to check out the architectural prose...

John Kavanaugh

Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #2 on: October 05, 2006, 08:00:01 AM »
Did the Butler do it...No, not the cabin..this ain't the Wizard of Oz..

John Kavanaugh

Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #3 on: October 05, 2006, 08:32:11 AM »
911 Call;

Caller:  Help..I've found a body at Amen Corner..

Operator: Is it on 13..

Caller: No

Operator: Is it on 12..

Caller: No

Operator:  Is the body on 11..

Caller: No

Operator:  Well then you're not at Amen corner...

RJ_Daley

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #4 on: October 05, 2006, 10:44:51 AM »
I'm betting the killer is the albino hairshirt-barbwire scrotum bound, GCA.com fanatic who was cloistered in a nunery in Illiana, who is pissed off at the rules committee chairman who was going to allow an 850CC spring-like effect plutonium club head and a nano-tech toon-a-mint ball, which due to higher performance playing characteristics for the less skilled golfers, allowed this "disabled copper" to get into the toon-a-mint in the first place.  So, he rubbed out the chairman, and plotted to take out the pretender cop, who was on a disability for hemroids from sitting in the cruiser too long.  As for Ms Rockingham.... well she just couldn't refuse any man in a uniform... and fell in love with the entire past winners champions and their uniform green jackets, and was the evening entertainment at the past champions dinner.

Dan Brown is ironically suing for infringements on his plot, given the "holy grail" and "amen corner" were too much alike, the babe and the detective chasing the murderer were the same theme, and the rules chairman murder victim was too much like the prior of Scion- whose body was found on the Louvre floor in the Da Vinci spread eagle, and the chairman's body on the tee box of 12 in the reverse C finish.

BTW, the albino gets it in the end...
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RJ_Daley

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #5 on: October 05, 2006, 10:55:24 AM »
Seriously, good luck with the book Rick.  I'm ordering it now...
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A.G._Crockett

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #6 on: October 05, 2006, 12:21:21 PM »
Just pre-ordered my copy.

The Workman's Comp thing is not a problem; good writers like Rick with good editors cover that stuff all the time.  Besides, this is golf we're talking about.  Craig Stadler plays.  Hell, John Daly plays!  How healthy do you have to be anyway?  
« Last Edit: October 05, 2006, 12:22:33 PM by A.G._Crockett »
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Jason Topp

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #7 on: October 05, 2006, 03:53:20 PM »
Congratulations Rick!  I look forward to reading it

Rick Shefchik

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #8 on: October 05, 2006, 04:24:53 PM »
I was going to hold off on the shameless plugging until next spring, but I see that I already need to do some corrective hypery.

I had to rush the synopsis to the publisher before I was through with the final edits, so let me make these slight changes to the plot summary that Dan posted:

The Masters official is found dead in the pond at Rae's Creek in front of the 12th green; and Skarda is now 37.

The first change was necessitated by a change in the title (Barney: It was originally called "The Last Masters," and though my editor wasn't worried about all the Masters references in the book, she was concerned about having it in the title); the second was made so Skarda could be older and remember more of the songs that I remember.

And Dick, you at least came close with the "toon-a-mint ball" detail -- sort of.

Thanks to George, I now know my book can be pre-ordered at Amazon. Apparently, the last people they tell these things to is the author. Thanks for the kind wishes, everyone.
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George Pazin

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #9 on: October 05, 2006, 04:29:06 PM »
Barn, you are one odd bird. I'd say seek help, but I don't want to alienate the entire psychiatric profession, as I may need to avail myself of their services someday. :)

I was thinking about Rick and his pursuits last night and it struck me that this group as a whole has an unusually high percentage of folks following their dream. Architects, writers, doctors, maybe even concrete guys. I think it's one of the things I enjoy most about the site, as the passion they have shines through in most posts.

 :)
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Dan Kelly

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #10 on: October 05, 2006, 04:45:46 PM »
I was thinking about Rick and his pursuits last night and it struck me that this group as a whole has an unusually high percentage of folks following their dream. Architects, writers, doctors, maybe even concrete guys. I think it's one of the things I enjoy most about the site, as the passion they have shines through in most posts.

 :)

You're a thoughtful guy. How's that workin' out for ya?  ;)

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Adam Clayman

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #11 on: October 05, 2006, 05:03:05 PM »
WTG Rick!

Dick, Wasn't Ms. Rockingham the feature entertainer at the previous 6 past champions dinners?  Otherwise excellent.
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Dan Kelly

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #12 on: October 05, 2006, 05:26:51 PM »
btw..Congrats Rick...I've got to order this thing just to check out the architectural prose...

Believe it or not, Rick's editor removed ALL of the references to Capability Brown.
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Dan Kelly

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #13 on: October 05, 2006, 08:37:08 PM »
It was originally called "The Last Masters"...

If I'm not mistaken, it was ORIGINALLY originally called "Watery Grave."

I can't remember how and why that one bit the dust (so to speak).
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Adam Clayman

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #14 on: October 05, 2006, 08:54:34 PM »
Aquatic doom may have sunk watery grave?
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John Kavanaugh

Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #15 on: October 06, 2006, 08:38:54 AM »
With the body now found on 12 is there a reference to Fred Couples and his shot where the ball hung up in 92.  Something like..The body slowly fell and stuck on the bank like Fred Couples ball in 92...but unlike the fate of that years eventual winner she slowly sunk into her watery grave never to hear applause again.
« Last Edit: October 06, 2006, 08:40:38 AM by John Kavanaugh »

Doug Wright

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #16 on: October 06, 2006, 10:07:47 AM »
Congratulations Rick! I'll remember to genuflect next time we meet... :D
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Dan Kelly

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #17 on: October 06, 2006, 10:41:11 AM »
... she slowly sunk into her watery grave ...

She?
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Dan Kelly

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #18 on: October 06, 2006, 10:42:32 AM »
Congratulations Rick! I'll remember to genuflect next time we meet... :D

What's-his-name will be genuflecting to you. You'll be genuflecting to Rick. Maybe I can get Rick to genuflect to me.

Should be plenty of entertainment on the 1st tee.
"There's no money in doing less." -- Joe Hancock, 11/25/2010
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John Kavanaugh

Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #19 on: October 06, 2006, 11:27:27 AM »
... she slowly sunk into her watery grave ...

She?

I thought it was a futuristic piece written for the woman demographic.  Talk about plot twists..

Rick Shefchik

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #20 on: October 06, 2006, 03:12:24 PM »
Doug --

No genuflection necessary. I'll just be flattered if you remember having met me... ;)
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Joe Hancock

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #21 on: October 06, 2006, 03:14:41 PM »
Congratulations Rick! I'll remember to genuflect next time we meet... :D

Only if you have supple hands.... 8)

Joe
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Dan Kelly

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Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #22 on: October 06, 2006, 04:55:06 PM »
Doug --

No genuflection necessary. I'll just be flattered if you remember having met me... ;)

Earlier today, I e-mailed what's-his-name to let him know that he'd been mentioned here. Even told him which thread to look in.

He called me a while later. Said he couldn't find any mention of himself. He asked which reply.

I directed him to Number 19.

He read it. STILL didn't recognize himself! Thought he MUST be "what's-his-name" -- but didn't appreciate why that was funny.

[PAUSE]

I'm pretty sure he forgot Doug's name -- again!

UFF-DA!

I said to him: "You're an idiot!"

He didn't disagree.
"There's no money in doing less." -- Joe Hancock, 11/25/2010
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Mike_Cirba

Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #23 on: October 06, 2006, 09:40:55 PM »
Rick...much congratulations are in order!  Sounds like some very enjoyable winter reading and i'm looking forward to buying a copy.  ;D

However, like Weird Al Yankovic's parodies of popular songs, I am also someday hoping to order John Kavanaugh's satirically twisted take-off of your novel.   Just reading a few of his blurbs has me hoping he gives up the asphalt and pursues his true calling as the next Hunter Thompson.  


Jim Nugent

Re:"Amen Corner," by Rick Shefchik
« Reply #24 on: October 07, 2006, 02:07:05 AM »
If the book is commercially successful, it suggests a whole series of murder/mysteries, each at a different world-class golf course, populated by movie stars (Riviera?)...investment bankers (NGLA?)...government spooks (Congressional?)...mafiosos (Shadow Creek?)...well, you get the idea.