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A few valid criticisms
Despite the facetious tone of this 'review', I don't make these claims lightly. I didn't suspend my critical faculties or lose my reason in rating this course. I wasn't just in a good mood because I was on holidays or because I was enjoying my 'honeymoon' as a new National member. Nor was I trying to re-assure myself that I'd made a good investment. The course is simply that good!
If anything, in playing the course so many times in such a concentrated period, I found myself more critically engaged than ever before on a golf course. I was really trying to articulate to myself what it was that made the course work on me in the way it did. In so doing, I managed to find a number of design elements or decisions that were not above question, but I really wasn't good enough to find anything that I could say seriously compromised the quality of the course or the site.
What about the short out, long in routing?
If you really wanted to quibble, you could question the balance of the Moonah's routing. The course is essentially out and back with just a couple of switchbacks or sidesteps each way. However, the farthest point from the first tee is not, as you might guess, the ninth green or the tenth tee, but the eleventh green and twelfth tee.
In trying to find, as Harrison and Norman claim, the 18 best holes on the property - 'wherever they lay' - they've done some great tight work close to the turn. Holes 8 through 11 zig-zag ingeniously into the most remote corner of the property, hard up against the massive sand dunes of the Mornington Peninsula National Park and an adjoining farm. (Take a look at the interactive map on the National website:
www.nationalgolf.com.au)
However, Harrison then seems to have found himself a long way from the clubhouse without a lot of holes left up his sleeve. As a consequence, the closing holes are by any measure a bit overweight. The last three par fours - 14, 16 and 18 - are in order 422 metres (I think that's 464 yards in the old language), 447 metres (492 yards) and 412 metres (453 yards). These are real distances from the back tees, the same tees that we members play from in medal rounds. And there's not much in the way of relief from the 'forward' tees we play every other round - at 462 yards, 464 yards and 437 yards. We're not in the mountains here, this is right beside the sea, and each of these holes must be played into the wind as often as upon it.
The holes between these par fours at the finish - a magnificent 585 yard par five at 15 (a hole that twists and writhes slowly downhill and to the right for two-thirds of its length before kinking back sharply uphill and to the left around a huge dune at the end) and a 221 yard one-shotter at 17 - don't offer much respite either.
In sharp contrast to the finish, the last three par fours on the way out play at a kindly 289 metres (#9), 356 metres (#10) and 334 metres (#11) from the members' tees. The 10th and 11th especially are very different, quite unique golf holes, as subtle and quirky as the closing holes are stout.
(The ninth we now understand (thanks to a one-hour, Network-televised special on the making of the National's two new courses - a story in itself: prime-time golf architecture) is a compromised design. Norman and Harrison originally wanted it to play somewhat longer, with the approach shot traversing the line of the tee shot on the semi-blind par three 13th in a homage to the crossover at the turn on The Old Course. Those plans were scotched when a nervous club consulted unsentimental lawyers, and it must be said the result feels somewhat manufactured, truncated or abbreviated. This will sound strange, but the ninth feels oddly, uncharacteristically short and 'fat' amidst a succession of lean, mean beauties.)
I'm just playing devil's advocate here. The taut holes at the turn and the mighty holes at the finish are all superb, and I don't think I'd change a one. However, largely as a result of this 'imbalance', I've found the course to be perhaps 5 shots easier (for me as a 7-marker) when the wind is from the north and helping on the way home. Playing into the wind on the way out is also an advantage as the approach shots on several holes (1, 6 and 8 especially) are next-door to impossible downwind.
Are the par threes as good as the rest of the holes?
The only other thing I would say if I was arguing the negative on the Moonah, is that I don't think the par threes - as a set - are quite as good as the fours and fives. Others disagree, and indeed my argument may be more a reflection of the quality of the two- and three-shotters than of any inherent weakness with the threes. To be sure, I have never played a better par five than the 15th, and the other three long holes are almost as good. With the first hole and the ninth as possible exceptions, every par four on the course is outstanding, with the fourth, tenth, eleventh, sixteenth and eighteenth deserving of special mention. (I'm loathe to highlight particular holes, because it is the overall strength, aesthetic consistency and strategic variety of the course that sets it apart. In this regard, the Moonah reminds me of Royal Adelaide, the other course I bracketed it with above).
By contrast to the variety of the par fours and fives, I think the first three short holes (5, 8 and 13) are a little too similar in length and concept. Each is a short iron downwind, maybe middle-iron into it; each is at least partly obscured, by mounding and/or bunkering (the 13th almost entirely); and the line to each from the tee is in each case somehow oblique. The tee on the 5th is offset to the left, the left side of the green is perilously bunkered and falls away probably 30 feet, and the green is almost impossible to hold from the left tee in a left-to-right wind. Next up, the 8th tee is offset to the right, the front right of the green is hideously bunkered, the false front on the green falls away probably 30 feet, and the green is almost impossible to hold downwind. Not quite mirror-reverse, but not as much fun as many or maybe any of the approaches to the par fours and fives. The 13th, a blind-but-for-the-top-of-the-flag par 3, is obscured by a short, bunkered mound, and is unquestionably my least favourite hole on the course, but Norman liked it enough to refuse to compromise it in dispute over the proposed cross-over, and eventually sacrificed the ninth to keep it. (Personally, whenever I get to the 13th tee, I look back down the tenth fairway, which runs away to the left, and know which hole I'd rather be playing.)
The 17th is a good hole that requires anything from 3 iron to 9 iron, but you could argue that it's not improved by a lone moonah tree at the front left, just where you need to bounce it in if the hole is cut at the front of the green and playing downwind. This is one of the few places on the course where the running approach is more difficult than the flighted one. On so many other approaches there are fabulous angled berms and curving slopes that produce great semi-circular runs to the hole. On more than one green, the most effective way to get to a back left pin is to bounce it in front right, or vice-versa.
I could carry on for another thousand words on the merits of the Moonah course, but I'll stop and see if George or Ran or anybody else who has had a chance to play the course or the patience to read this far wants to differ or concur.
BTW, congratulations to you all on a fantastic site. I've learned a lot in the few months that I've been following these discussions, and I expect to learn a lot more yet.
Regards,
Anthony"