I'd love to hear what guys on this site think of articles like this. Any comments would be appreciated?
Mark --
It is a rare occasion when I don't want to re-edit, in whole or in part, an article I've read.
It is a very rare occasion when I don't want to re-edit a golf article I've read.
It is an extremely rare occasion when I don't want to remove a sports-article lede that talks about Greek mythology.
It is an extraordinarily rare occasion when I don't want to remove (or radically truncate, while crying out in pain) an extended-metaphor lede referring to Odysseus and the Sirens -- particularly in an article about golf-course architecture.
You guys have achieved all of these occasions for me. Good work.
Dan