Tobacco Road Haiku's..

« **Reply #25 on:** August 17, 2006, 04:20:59 PM »

JK, Here's an Irish Haiku, especially for you.

There once lived an archie named Strantz,
'Paved' the Road when offered the chance,
Some are glad that he chose it
while others say "Doze it",
I'm just happy it isn't in France.

« **Reply #26 on:** August 17, 2006, 04:27:28 PM »

John,
This is all wrong, all wrong.

This isn't Haiku Tuesdays..... (One of my all-time favorite posts!)

« **Reply #27 on:** August 17, 2006, 05:09:42 PM »

Ahhh Haiku Tuesdays
Sentimentally recall
rosy days long passed

« **Reply #28 on:** August 17, 2006, 08:12:14 PM »

Whimsical golf course
Strantz and Fezler together
Strantz left too early

« **Reply #29 on:** August 17, 2006, 08:26:13 PM »

Never played the course
I guess John doesn't like it
Sounds like a critic

« **Reply #30 on:** August 18, 2006, 08:51:08 AM »

Tim Bert is right on
What's next? Kavanaugh rating?!
I bet he wants comps.

« **Reply #31 on:** August 18, 2006, 09:11:47 AM »

Great Thread!

« **Reply #32 on:** August 18, 2006, 10:04:08 AM »

Crusty's nether world
Micheal's intredpid next world
Both heaven and hell

I've got one on Nantucket I'll be sharing later.

« **Reply #33 on:** August 18, 2006, 10:24:01 PM »

Have yet to play it
Is it better than Pinehurst
1, 4, 7, & 8?

« **Reply #34 on:** August 18, 2006, 11:11:43 PM »

Nantucket, how good?
Picturesque old isle of wind
Rees Jones really blows

« **Reply #35 on:** August 18, 2006, 11:13:01 PM »

Opinion of TR?
1 + 4 + 7 + 8
Still not the equal

« **Reply #36 on:** August 19, 2006, 12:38:13 AM »

Folks crazy over this Road
Now I'll make more more folks more crazy. Because
Sandpines is still rated higher

« **Reply #37 on:** August 19, 2006, 01:26:33 AM »

The apparition of these faces in the crowd;
Petals on a wet, black bough.

« **Reply #38 on:** August 19, 2006, 02:17:26 AM »

Ah, Tobacco Road.
Some say it's close to perfect.
But it's far from me.

« **Reply #39 on:** August 19, 2006, 08:13:00 AM »

For raters,
The Road less travelled.
Strantz made all the difference.

« **Reply #40 on:** August 19, 2006, 01:34:10 PM »

Strantz the late Artist
Fashioned the Road to prompt our
Different opinions

« **Reply #41 on:** August 19, 2006, 01:36:15 PM »

Jordan won't get it
Number of syllables wrong
Try it again, son

« **Reply #42 on:** August 19, 2006, 03:31:51 PM »

Jordan may be wrong
but what is Goodale doing
quoting Ezra Pound?

« **Reply #43 on:** August 19, 2006, 09:50:15 PM »

I will do it right
But you know the real truth
Kyle is Jealous

« **Reply #44 on:** August 20, 2006, 12:42:51 PM »

Quote from: Tony Muldoon on August 19, 2006, 03:31:51 PM

Jordan may be wrong
but what is Goodale doing
quoting Ezra Pound?

Like the 16-year cicada
Pound knew no rules.
Function trumps form--always

« **Reply #45 on:** August 20, 2006, 05:41:50 PM »

Jordan was confused
I guess they no longer teach
Haiku in high school

« **Reply #46 on:** August 20, 2006, 06:11:09 PM »

Yes I know how to
Write a decent Haiku and
Kyle's still jealous

« **Reply #47 on:** August 20, 2006, 07:41:33 PM »

Jordan.

Haiku starts with five
Flows smoothly into seven
Retreats back to five

« **Reply #48 on:** August 20, 2006, 07:50:51 PM »

The Magazines rate Tobacco Road
Like a dead Toad
Nowhere in Sight
Like it was Architecture Light
But if the truth be told
The Architect is Bold
And rather than pale
It is off the scale
So give it a cheer
so everyone can hear
It's a course that everyone should hold dear

« **Reply #49 on:** August 21, 2006, 07:01:13 AM »

Yeah Cary!

Mike and Heidi Strantz
Dana and andrea too
Nicest family

Tobacco road rules
fire up the big lear jet
next up, black mesa!

Viva eddie peck
spann visited tobacco
now we have two gems!

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