I think the drawing is well done but it looks like for the 2nd time in a row someone won without drawing the section view per the instructions of the contest.
It also mentions this:
"What kind of design should be submitted? The competition will be restricted to the design of a
proposed (not existing) "One shot," par-three hole. The design should be in the form of an
elaborated sketch giving the viewer a clear idea of how the hole would be constructed and
played. It should show yardages, tee locations, alternative playing routes, hazards, bunkers,
green location and contours with alternative pin placements, and side elevation of the terrain."