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Eric Smith

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Re: Wah wah wah in the golf tower...
« Reply #25 on: June 29, 2011, 10:36:28 AM »
And you can always
Follow me on Tweeter at
Governor Perry.
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JC Jones

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Re: Wah wah wah in the golf tower...
« Reply #26 on: June 29, 2011, 10:45:42 AM »
When I thought over
O T threads I see Haiku
on Golf Club Atlas
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I get it, you are mad at the world because you are an adult caddie and few people take you seriously.

Excellent spellers usually lack any vision or common sense.

I know plenty of courses that are in the red, and they are killing it.

Peter Pallotta

Re: Wah wah wah in the golf tower...
« Reply #27 on: June 29, 2011, 10:53:37 AM »
Eric, JC - you're both great guys, but those are terrible haikus.

Or, to follow your example of just writing a sentence and then breaking it up artificially:

You are both great guys
Those are terrible haikus
Don't write a sentence

(Please don't hate me because I have higher standards in this regard. You guys are good at other things, that's all)
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Phil McDade

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Re: Wah wah wah in the golf tower...
« Reply #28 on: June 29, 2011, 11:20:17 AM »
Quote from: John Kavanaugh on June 29, 2011, 10:20:08 AM
Haiku is ancient
Twitter, structured nonsense for
people with no lives.

No finer thing said
On GolfClubAtlas this year
Twitter = Fazio?
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John Kirk

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Re: Wah wah wah in the golf tower...
« Reply #29 on: June 29, 2011, 11:45:26 AM »
Cloudy, peaceful skies
Every shade of green displayed
Oregon summer.

OOPS

« Last Edit: June 29, 2011, 11:49:45 AM by John Kirk »
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Eric Smith

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Re: Wah wah wah in the golf tower...
« Reply #30 on: June 29, 2011, 11:54:34 AM »
Thank you, Peter. You're right of course - it's a terrible haiku.
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JC Jones

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Re: Wah wah wah in the golf tower...
« Reply #31 on: June 29, 2011, 01:05:53 PM »
Quote from: PPallotta on June 29, 2011, 10:53:37 AM
Eric, JC - you're both great guys, but those are terrible haikus.

Or, to follow your example of just writing a sentence and then breaking it up artificially:

You are both great guys
Those are terrible haikus
Don't write a sentence

(Please don't hate me because I have higher standards in this regard. You guys are good at other things, that's all)


That's it.  I'm taking my ball and going home.
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I get it, you are mad at the world because you are an adult caddie and few people take you seriously.

Excellent spellers usually lack any vision or common sense.

I know plenty of courses that are in the red, and they are killing it.

John Kirk

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Re: Wah wah wah in the golf tower...
« Reply #32 on: June 29, 2011, 02:09:42 PM »
Narcissistic man,
Living is his nowhere land,
He will be lonely.


Django plays guitar,
My spirit lifts with great joy,
Expression mastered.


Ballyneal's contours
The ball appears, disappears,
Perfect for golfing.

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Phil McDade

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Re: Wah wah wah in the golf tower...
« Reply #33 on: June 29, 2011, 03:58:36 PM »
Quote from: John Kirk on June 29, 2011, 02:09:42 PM

Ballyneal's contours
The ball appears, disappears,
Perfect for golfing.



Kirk's theory holds true
Watching shots unfold slowly
Recommend others?
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Peter Pallotta

Re: Wah wah wah in the golf tower...
« Reply #34 on: June 29, 2011, 04:10:18 PM »
JC - don't forget the 8 iron while you're at it.

JK, Phil - nice. Let me pile on with:

No seaside links there
But wind and freedom and sky
A golfer breathes peace
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Doug Wright

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Re: Wah wah wah in the golf tower...
« Reply #35 on: June 29, 2011, 04:44:07 PM »
Golf 58 at Bally
I stand and watch
As Colton flies by
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John Kirk

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Re: Wah wah wah in the golf tower...
« Reply #36 on: June 29, 2011, 06:11:49 PM »
Quote from: Doug Wright on June 29, 2011, 04:44:07 PM
Golf 58 at Bally
I stand and watch
As Colton flies by

Let me fix that for you!

Golf fifty-eight at Bally
I stand and watch with envy
As Colton flies by
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Kyle Henderson

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Re: Wah wah wah in the golf tower...
« Reply #37 on: June 29, 2011, 06:26:33 PM »
Quote from: John Kirk on June 29, 2011, 06:11:49 PM
Quote from: Doug Wright on June 29, 2011, 04:44:07 PM
Golf 58 at Bally
I stand and watch
As Colton flies by

Let me fix that for you!

Golf fifty-eight at Bally
I stand and watch with envy
As Colton flies by


Let me fix that for you!

Golfing at Bally
I stand and watch with envy
As Colton flies by
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