Thanks so far--this is great.
BC--the left drawing is just a copy of the right one and I ran out of room n the sheet of paper! Most of the area left of the creek is off of my property.
Although at one time in the history of the hole the "534" tee was located left of the creek near the head of the detention pond (the small pond near the tees). The angle was too severe and most players laid back off the tee versus trying to hit a big hook around the corner--the trees on the right came in too soon and a straight ball ended up through the fairway and in the woods.
The 534 tee is pretty much built on a dam and our large irrigation lake which isn't pictured starts right at its rear such that the left edge of the 573 tee is right on the lake's edge.
JK
You think the 424 is too long overall or because of the forced carry? I rarely see women carrying the creek in two but I swear every time I shorten a hole for them they complain it is too easy. Early in construction of hole #2 (another par 5) I had some women worry that the hole may be too short as it was about 390--I wanted a "easy" par 5 early in the round that was reachable by everyone if they felt "ready" but became sensitive to the "card length" after that conversation. Also our forward tee on a par 3 was 88 yards and I was told it was an "insulting" tee for the ladies
Anyway, an extra tee or more forward tee would be an easy change.
Also the first thought was to fill in the first pond as you mentioned, dredge out the green side of the second pond and create a more straight flowing creek and using old cross ties, native grasses (spartina for wet areas is a favorite of mine) and create a bunker in that reclaimed area--we think we could make it cool looking and then clean up the rest of the crossing creek by laying it back a bit, grassing down to the water and deepening the channel in a coupe of places.
Also, erosion control in the form of surge stone, large rocks etc. (we have used gabions in some areas) would be placed on the far bank where the crossing creek merges into the left creek.
Will
You think the "pipe the whole thing" and use cross bunkers doesn't give enough room to play around? Wasn't thinking that way but thanks for that thought.
Please keep any ideas coming. I will post some "before" pics and then of course "after" when we are done. (If it ever stops raining in Atlanta