Tom...I'm glad you agree...the hole I described was in its simplest form, all variety of hazards could be incorporated for interest, as well as the existing terrain,etc......but the key ways to play the hole would be;
Drive and play past the green to set up a relatively safe third shot,
Drive and attempt to hold the green in two while risking the surrounding hazards or,
Drive and layup the second shot so the third shot could be played with a lofted club that would better hold the back sloping green.
...the design intent here is to create three shot strategies for par fives that do not rely on length alone.
Now the playback par four is similar but with key differences, especially in the length from tee to green, which should be in the 265 to 280 yard range while still including a front layup fairway and a fairway beyond the green........