I must say that it's nice to have something you wrote twenty years ago quoted back to you, and find not much to change. I must have had some very good editors for that project! The one passage that is awkward to read is the first one quoted:
Pg 71 “We might go so far as to say that the strategically arranged hole should feature the most difficult or penal hazards, whereas the penally arranged hole must not have penal hazards if it is to remain playable for the average golfer.”
This hits me as an odd statement. I think I get the point (if a hazard has no penalty associated with it the strategic choices are minimized) but if a penal hazard is unplayable for the average golfer on a penally arranged hole isn’t it also unplayable for the average golfer that finds it on a strategic hole even if the architect gives the player plenty of opportunity to avoid it.
So, what I meant is that on a "strategic" hole [with only a couple of bunkers to defend the strategy], the more difficult the hazards, the better. But on a "penal" hole [with cross bunkers and bunkers pinching the fairway on both sides and the like], if you have very difficult hazards, then if you have difficult hazards it's unplayable for the average golfer.
Sadly, most of modern design in the 80's and 90's [and some of it still today] had evolved to the latter description -- lots of bunkers, all of them shallow -- so they are very bothersome to the bad player who has trouble getting out of a bunker, but seldom cause the good player to think.
As for the p. 100 quote, Connor has it right. Ironically, I've found that one of the worst offenders of this rule was Dr. MacKenzie ... he frequently built curvy greens with bunkers protruding into them, and not always like the one I illustrated at Crystal Downs where the slopes allow you to putt around the curve.