Matt W.
How about some critical analysis? Your descriptions read like the website; that is, very fluffy descriptions, e.g., "...being too far from the hole after your approach invites a likely bogey or more, " or "There is a oond [sic] which jealously guards the left side of the hole."
For those of us who have not been there, please try to provide us a good reason to do so. Don't try to sell us a membership with trite advertising gimicks aimed at people who have never seen a golf course before (which again, is how your words read from time to time). Instead, engage us in an actual discussion about the holes.