Mike,
I'm becoming even more curious about your critique, only because, so far, you've based the criticism on your own(two) results. I think you're leading up to something, so I'm wondering how your ball ended up in the bunker when it was:
a) on line during most of it's flight?
b) off line but working towards the correct line?
c) a thing of beauty, regardless of line?
d) none of the above
Looking forward to further insights,
Joe