David,
I am sorry that I paraphrased myself and Lesley in what I wanted to be a quick type, rather than go back and paste in TePaul's version from somewhere out of 6000 plus posts here. I am sorry only because it gives you more reason to parse words, thump your chest, and tell me I am dumb as a stump.
But then as a lawyer, you are used to parsing words to get a conclusion you want, and last time I checked, lawyers weren't really interested in the truth, in general, they are interested in presenting the best possible case for their clients, and refuting almost everything the other side might have to say, going to incredible lengths on minutia when the basic facts are not in their favor. And that is your pattern here.
Maybe the OJ case has scarred me for life regarding attorneys and arguments based on deflection away from substance to parsing of words, etc. We all have our biases, myself included.
But, in terms of what a historian might say (and I would still love to have one weigh in on this circle jerk of a discussion) I stand by my generalized assertion that the source document, grammar notwithstanding, is probably the best evidence we have as to what happened. All your parsing and Tom Mac's logic could be wrong. History should be more facts and less interpretation, albeit some of both are always required.
Just out of curiosity, and understanding completely why you want to see the source document, IF TePaul has doctored his excerpt, just what do you expect to find that he doctored? And, how would changing the grammar of all that affect anyone's theory? I say it would be very risky for him to alter the document here, both because of his relationship to MCC and because if it ever came out, his rep would really be damaged. In addition, he would really have to concoct an alternate scenario to cover his bases that would pass vetting as well. I am not critiqing his intelligence when I say it would be difficult to anticipate all the possible ramifications of such deception that you allege.
I mean really, do you think he has all the time in the world to do that, just to screw with you?