FBD,
Huh? What are the authors saying in this paragraph? Maybe it is just me, but even if I can get beyond the 'flowery' stuff, I have a hard time keeping my simple mind on the key thought. I guess economy is a good thing in architecture and construction, but not in writing. Though I think I know what they're trying to impart, I have to work way too hard to get there.
The paragraph and the overall writing style reminds me of a discussion on public TV in Boston in the mid-70s on male homosexuality. A very refined, highly articulate ex-homosexual was developing a lengthy and detailed thesis to support his contention that sexual orientation is cultural and learned (therefore, it could be altered through therapy and retraining). Admittedly, I was highly impressed with this man's oratory style, though I could only understand about half of what he said.
Awhile later, when it was the non-repentant homosexual's turn to speak (a rough-looking, muscular biker-type with Ivy League school credentials), he bluntly, but simply stated that he didn't have a clue as to what his opponent had just said, therefore, it must be bulls--t. In the course of a few minutes, he layed down a simple, but precise argument on why he believed it was physiological in nature and not alterable through behavior modification. While I was not necessarily predisposed to the latter argument, I came away much more open to this explanation than the other.
Moral of the story- if you want to reach people, at least folks like me, don't make it too hard to understand your point. Challenge me more with reasons as to why things are as they are, come up with some postulates and conclusions, and force me to think why and how these apply under different circumstances. Whatever treasures are buried in the W & S book which comes so highly recommended by many qualified sources, they are lost on me. Nevertheless, as soon as I finish Daley's fine GAvol.2, hopefully before 3 arrives, I'll pull W & S for a second reading.
Thanks for bringing it up, Martin.
George,
Why do you wish that on poor Martin?
Hell, Adam is as likely to point and make all sorts of gestures as he is to talk.